A good poem presenting the current situaton of the society. Intolerence made us restless. Pain is made to appear beautiful that one may sacrifice life with expectations of heavenly benefits. Expressions like 'red drops' from 'white clouds' is a clear suggestion of violence that is being perpetrated. Ue of words' 'dunes', 'hawks' indidcate the precariousness of life todday.
Satish Verma
kantasatish@gmail.com, Ajmer
Oct 15, 2022