Simply Watch

Faith was me. My poems
go wild, when you fly without wings.
Fame comes slowly at dawn.

You were a masterpiece
of my love. Unwritten in a secret book.
My courage has made you a jaguar.

We all are going to commit
suicide one by one to pay back the
debt of Eden garden.

A modernist poem bordering on obscurity.

Rajendra Singh Baisthakur , Nellore, AP, 524003

Your poem reminded me of Eden Garden and how love was generated between two souls. 
A lovely poem with a good message, Satish jee.

Padma, Hyderabad, Sep 21, 2022