YOUR SPACE
Poetry
Drowned Faith
Can you walk on the
ocean? The ethereal melodies turn
blue. Green birds are falling.
Can you forgive the
butcher? Who has opened my wounds?
Pain has deep water, throws the years in a fire.
The marriage will not
take place in between the sun and moon
in open death. Flowers don't plead.
Such a beautiful poem packed with many emotions and effects, Satish jee!
Padma,
Hyderabad,
Dec 23, 2021
Sir, its a true learning experience to read your work. this one conveys intensity of emotions words and images
N K Jyothi,
Mumbai,
Dec 23, 2021
Author
Satish Verma
kantasatish@gmail.com, Ajmer
Dec 23, 2021